The Noise That Wasn’t Imaginary
- AB Clean Hattan
- Oct 8, 2025
- 2 min read
It was 1:43 a.m. — which is the exact hour when your survival instincts wake up but your dignity is still asleep.
I was in bed pretending not to listen for things. You know, normal people stuff. The house was quiet enough to hear the dog's heavy breathing and AC unit kicking on. Then something changed. Not loud — wrong.

It came from the side of the house near my daughter’s room. A tap. Then another. Then what I can only describe as the sound of someone testing a latch they don’t fully understand.
You know how people say, “My blood ran cold”? No — mine went tactical.
I didn’t turn on lights. I didn’t call anyone. I didn’t even breathe like a cooperative human. I moved through the house like someone who’s already pictured every way this could go wrong and ranked them in order of annoyance.
When I reached my daughter’s door, I heard it again — a creak of pressure against the window pane. Not wind. Not branches. Pressure. Intent.
I whispered her name. She didn’t answer. That fraction of a second almost shaved a year off my life expectancy. I cracked the door.
She was asleep. Face buried in stuffed animals. Oblivious.
The noise came again — directly behind the curtains.
I crossed the room, fast and silent, and yanked them open.
Nothing.
But the screen — the screen — was slightly pushed in at the corner. Like someone had tested its give but hadn’t committed. Yet.
I didn’t scream. I didn’t gasp. I didn’t panic. The anger that can only come from a mother, a parent whose most important role is to protect her family kicked in.
The Moment the Line Snapped

I went outside through the back door with my flashlight and the 9mm I keep on the bedside dresser. The grass was damp. The fence line was darker than usual.
My neighbor’s motion light didn’t kick on — suspicious by itself.
I followed the strip of mud along the side of the house. No human footprints, but something had disturbed the wet ground. An impression — too light to belong to a grown man, too deliberate to be an animal.
I scanned the fence. And that’s when I saw it — something pale and smudged wedged into the slat near the Harper property line.
A fingernail scraping? A chip of plastic? A note from God?
Hard to tell in bad lighting, but it was there, and it wasn’t there earlier. Don’t ask how I know. I just do. I climbed onto the ceramic planter — the one I’ve broken twice and resurrected with emotional grout — and peered over the fence toward the Harper house.
A light flickered inside. Not bright — not a lamp. More like the glow of a fridge door opening in the dark. Then gone.
Barefoot, gun in hand, I felt the exact second patience clocked out and angry determination showed up. No one threatens my family, my home.
Paranoia? No. That’s what people call it when it’s too early to say “evidence.”
Someone is easing their way into my house. Or out of theirs. And after tonight, I’m done being polite.




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